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摩登彩票网址多少,跟雅思考官Simon学写小作文系列之堆积条形图
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[摘要] 我们简单看下堆积条形图,并试试写写这个题目。你注意到simon考官同一含义的不同表达了吗?考官范文依旧使用的是simon考官推荐的“四段法”,一段引入段,一段概述段以及两段细节段,着重讲述了如何改写和比较信息。猛戳“了解更多”,查看七悠雅思高品质原创范文,领取赠品

摩登彩票网址多少,跟雅思考官Simon学写小作文系列之堆积条形图

摩登彩票网址多少,我们简单看下堆积条形图,并试试写写这个题目。

the chart below shows the amount of time that 10 to 15-year-olds spend chatting on the internet and playing on games consoles on an average school day in the uk.

在我们动笔前,先快速思考这几个问题。

1.which activity is most popular overall?

2.what differences can you see between boys' and girls' habits?

3.what is the total figure for boys who play on games consoles?

4.what proportion of girls chat on the internet for 4 hours or more?

引入段:

the bar chart compares the time spent by 10 to 15-year-olds in the uk on two activities, namely chatting online and playing computer games.

概述段:

overall, we can see that playing computer games is marginally more popular than chatting on the internet. however, completely different trends can be seen if we look at the specific figures for boys and girls.

细节段1:

boys aged between 10 and 15 clearly favour playing on games consoles over chatting online. according to the chart, while 85% of boys play computer games every day, only 55% chat online daily. furthermore, the majority of boys play on their consoles for more than one hour each day, and 10% do this activity for four hours or more.

细节段2:

by contrast, girls prefer chatting online. close to 70% of 10 to 15-year-old girls engage in online conversation each day, compared to about 50% of this cohort who play computer games. of the girls who do play on consoles, most of them play for less than an hour, whereas most girls who chat online do so for more than one hour, and nearly 10% chat for four hours or more.

note:

simon考官选择男孩写一段,女孩写另一段。但是网上聊天写一段,玩游戏写一段也是可以的。

你注意到simon考官同一含义的不同表达了吗?

the amount of time = the time spent

10 to 15-year-olds = aged between 10 and 15

chatting on the internet = chatting online = chat online = engage in online conversation

playing on games consoles = playing computer games = play on their consoles

more popular = boys favour = girls prefer

the majority of = most of them = most girls

以及比较信息……

...is more popular than...

boys favour... / by contrast, girls prefer...

while 85% of boys..., only 55%...

close to 70% of girls..., compared to about 50% of this cohort who...

most of them..., whereas most...

我们可以看到堆积条形图和其他图表切入点大同小异,写堆积条形图前,学会问自己几个问题分析信息。考官范文依旧使用的是simon考官推荐的“四段法”,一段引入段,一段概述段以及两段细节段,着重讲述了如何改写和比较信息。

猛戳“了解更多”,查看七悠雅思高品质原创范文,领取赠品(外教模考,作文范文等)